Rukmani Sankar
Well-Known Member
Super story Kavi ....
Romba niraiva irrunthuthu dear .....
Romba niraiva irrunthuthu dear .....
thanks hema..... mmmm... thanks to saying.... u r try to read my next story na thanks ma...Until finish ur story I didn't move to next site. Nice pa. Gonna good.
But can improve wit some dialogues pa. Felt less dialogue nd more narration.
If I m right take it as comment pa,else ignore.
Story super sis.. rmba alagana aalamana natpu simply super ending