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Hi Jo...Nice starts..writing style is super....keep it up...waiting for next episode..
Hei Shrijo, eppidippa irukkeenga, ungalai paarthu neenda naatgal aagivittathu pa sathamaeyillamal, ''NENJIRUKKUM VARAI'' story=yai mudithu vitteergal, romba arumaiyaana novel pa adhu, superb and unexpected ending and thank you for that
ippo intha ''NEELATH THIRAIKADAL OARATHILAE'' 1st ud very superb pa
starting-la-yae amarkalamaaga arambuthu irukkireergal
Ganga paavam pa, avalukku office-yilum intha Vijay @ Vijayanidam thittu vaangukiraal, veettiyil, athaiyammavidamum thittu vaangukiraal
Ganga, azhakaga iruthaal intha athaiyammalukku ivvalavu jealous-ah?
adhu eppidippa, ippo irukkira veedu, Mayuri ammavukkum thaai veettu sothu enbathaal ivangalukkum rights irukkae, ivanga yen pa thannoda urimai=yai vittu tharanum?
yen pa ivangalakkum uriyaana veettukku rent kodukkiraanga, adhuvum anniyidam?
ithaiyellam paarkkaamal, intha Senthil engae pa ponaar?
waiting for your next lovely ud Shrijo dear
Thanks ma!hai sis,first ud super sis.
Thank you sister!Hi Shrijo,
Good start, My best wishes ya.