My poem

[Mers]

I wander without looking into miles ,
I search into the wind to inhale ur breathe,
I am lost into nature to find your footprints,
I gaze at moon to tell you that am waiting here for years ,
I feel the splash of rain which you are admiring at your window ,
I just keep counting my minutes to see you ,
I don't know your whereabout but still I wanna say I'll love u the instant I see u ,
I am waiting and longing as a child not like a woman

PS : just a poetic feel. Kavithai aruviya kotuthu

Please do feedback

 

[Sundaramuma]

Nice ...

 

[Mers]

Nice ...

Thank u so much

 

[Kavyajaya]

Super...easy aa puriyuthu

 

[Mers]

Thank u so much

 

[Devi29]

I am waiting and longing as a child not like a woman

nice sis

 

[Mers]

Thank u so much sis

 

[Thamaraipenn]

I don't know your whereabout but still I wanna say I'll love u the instant I see u ,
I am waiting and longing as a child not like a woman

PS : just a poetic feel. Kavithai aruviya kotuthu

Aruvi romba azhaga iruku mera..
The two lines are really too wonderful fear

 

[Mahalakshmi palanivel]

Nice sis

 

[Mers]

I don't know your whereabout but still I wanna say I'll love u the instant I see u ,
I am waiting and longing as a child not like a woman

PS : just a poetic feel. Kavithai aruviya kotuthu

Aruvi romba azhaga iruku mera..
The two lines are really too wonderful fear

Thank u so much