Pursuit Of Love - 1

[sumiram]

Nice start. Pranav, prathu kodutha introla impress agittan. Lasta oru touch vachitaye prathu enna ninaippalo? Comment enga panila thanglishla podalam thhane pa?

 

[priya durai]

nice title dear
pranav & pratiksha nice name combination
quite interesting read in english

 

[Lalithaganesan]

Hey friends,

Sorry guys... I was late by 2 days! Here you go with the 1st epi of POL:

Disclaimer : Please dont compare this story with my Tamil ones... It will be different as it was my 1st attempt at writing. I didnt have the seriousness at that time!

https://www.mallikamanivannan.com/pursuit-love-1/
Please do comment your views after reading

Nice start

 

[Sharmila Natarajan]

I have a few questions for you: Why did you choose to write in English? It seems like the narration is a literal translation from Tamil to English, which shouldn't be the case. If you want to be a good Tamil writer, the best way to achieve that is to read as much Tamil as possible. If you want to improve writing in English, I would suggest you to read English books. Reading different authors will make you think in English.

I read a few lines: "were" was confused with "where".

Please be careful with spellings, dictions, grammar and sentence formation. It's very imprtant.

Good luck!