Mayakkam Kondenadi Thozhi - 4

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Bhuvana

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Jakku :oops: adiye intha paiyan romba over aa la thulluran, Divi pullai ya car la thallitu, Priya va parthu selfish nu vera solluran idiot.
Priya solution thaane sollura. Avanuku ippa Divi venum nu ninaipu vanthurucho. Pakki adha Priya kita love propose panna munnadi ye la yosichu irukkanum hmm.

Waiting for the next ud.
 

saveethamurugesan

Writers Team
Tamil Novel Writer
Yoi enna minnal

ippadi pannita... ithellam kanava... ayyako my energy waste

ana enaku innum ravi mela kovam kuraiyavey illai... raviyala dhivs yarukum vittu koduka mudiyalainu ninaikiren, athan over ah react panni overa sothapitan...

raghav veetila pesurathum konjam over than, ivanga ellam entha century la irukanga innum nu purilai... ippolam aan pen natpu sagajamana onnu... unmaiyave rendu perukum pidichiruntha avanga veetilaye panni vaichiruka maatangala, ethuku dhivs ku vera mappillai parkaranga... raghav ammavachum antha kalathu aalu pesuranganu sonnalum raghav pesinathu othuka mudiyalai...

priya unaku dhivs mela poramainu ninaikiren, ravi unnai vida avaluku importance kodukarathu unaku pidikalai, intha raviyum athuku yetha mathiri overa panran... enga mutta pogutho enga vetta pogutho... ivalo thitti iruken adutha epi la ithaiyum kanavakidathey da sakthi...
 

saveethamurugesan

Writers Team
Tamil Novel Writer
Jakku :oops: adiye intha paiyan romba over aa la thulluran, Divi pullai ya car la thallitu, Priya va parthu selfish nu vera solluran idiot.
Priya solution thaane sollura. Avanuku ippa Divi venum nu ninaipu vanthurucho. Pakki adha Priya kita love propose panna munnadi ye la yosichu irukkanum hmm.

Waiting for the next ud.

Ennanu kelu bhuvi kavuthu potta karapan poochi kanaka payapullai kadakadannu thulluthu... kalam kadanthu pullaiku gyanodhayam varuthu pola, athuku dhivi priya valkai than kidaichutha avanuku...
 

kavitha28

Well-Known Member
hi sarayu
so its a dream!....me too thought its a bit filmy,,but now its nice...yes ravi over reacts,but if he doesnt do this ,then he will not be divs ravi...such reaction is to be expected n with his slight mayakam towards her ,this is what he will do surely...thats how u ve drawn his chr.....really sema story telling...
priya's plight to be seen+all the other parent's raction too...
excellent work...
keep rocking n
please do not delay the nxt ud...
 

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